I have kept the coloured lines but just removed the "A" initial from the logo. much more legible now. Not too sure if you see the "R" first or the "A".
I've begun to add colour to different parts of the logo so that it helps with legibility. It is working however the "S" initial is the first thing you see followed by the "A".
Some people i spoke too said that they couldn't see my initials in the logo. R, A, S. Because of this i have begun to develop the legibility of the logo through colour and by extending the lines. Here i have made the "A" much more visible. However do you now look at the A first before the R.
Thought my logo was a little too simple, even though thats what i'm after so i thought i might as well add a circle that had no meaning to my name. More of a aesthetic thing and the fact that everyone is putting things in circles nowadays. The result it something that doesn't mean anything and give an impression of don't go here. Like a stop warning sign. Not good.
Don't like all the details on one page and centralised. Looks very cluttered and not very professional. The back of the card has remained white so you can write notes on the back.
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